Thursday, November 12, 2015

Writing Challenge – Myth Language

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Challenge: Myth language is an awesome resource for writers.
Write a play that is the birth of a myth. Piggy-back on actual myths. Steal language and plot lines. Mix and match. Have fun!  Example, wikipedia water/earth/fertility goddess. Click on some names. Pull key words and plot points.

RHYMES WITH DUCK


ELOHIM sits at a bar.  He’s dressed formally.

ARISTOTLE walks up to the bar.

                          ARISTOTLE
So a minister and an atheistic walk into a bar –

                          ELOHIM
Before you say anything you think is funny, you should know I’m actually a minister.

                          ARISTOTLE
And I’m actually an atheist.

                          ELOHIM
Small world.  Good guess.

                          ARISTOTLE
Not really.  I saw you greeting parishioners after the service outside your church this morning.  The robes were kind of a giveaway.

                          ELOHIM
Here I thought not having to wear a collar like a priest would get me a pass in my off hours.

                          ARISTOTLE
God’s kind of a 24-7 gig, isn’t he?

                          ELOHIM
Can be.
So you’re stalking me?

                          ARISTOTLE
Technically.

                          ELOHIM
Should I be worried?

                          ARISTOTLE
No.

                          ELOHIM
You have me at a disadvantage.

                          ELOHIM offers his hand.

                          ELOHIM (cont’d)
Elohim.

                          ARISTOTLE
Ari.

                          ELOHIM
Larry?

                          ARISTOTLE
No, Ari.  It’s short for Aristotle.

                          ELOHIM
Well, your parents had low expectations for you.

                          ARISTOTLE
And yours didn’t?

                          ELOHIM
So you know –

                          ARISTOTLE
That Elohim’s one of the Hebrew names for God.  Yeah.

                          ELOHIM
Middle name?

                          ARISTOTLE
Alexander.

                          ELOHIM
Great philosopher, world’s greatest warrior.

                          ARISTOTLE
No world’s left to conquer.

                          ELOHIM
Very low expectations.

                          ARISTOTLE
Yours?

                          ELOHIM
     (pronouncing it hay-SOOS)
Jesus.

                          ARISTOTLE
Spelled like - ?

                          ELOHIM
Yup.

                          ARISTOTLE
So did they just give you minister’s robes at your christening?

                          ELOHIM
You’d think so, wouldn’t you?

                          ARISTOTLE
You seemed sad.

                          ELOHIM
You just lost me.

                          ARISTOTLE
I was watching you, on the steps of the church.  You’re really good at hiding it, but you seemed sad.

                          ELOHIM
You’re an expert in sadness, are you?

                          ARISTOTLE
It’s a little early in the day to be hitting the bar.

                          ELOHIM holds up his drink.

                          ELOHIM
I’m not hitting it very hard.  This is my first, probably my only.  I can walk home.  And the demanding part of my work day is already over.

                          ARISTOTLE
So why are you talking to me?

                          ELOHIM
Occupational hazard.  I rarely walk away from a conversation.  Particularly if someone introduces themselves as an atheist.

                          ARISTOTLE
Conversion challenge boner?

                          ELOHIM
Not a delicate way of putting it, but sure, if you like.  I don’t expect to get anywhere in a single sitting, mind you.  Doesn’t mean I’m not intrigued.

                          ARISTOTLE
I’m intriguing?

                          ELOHIM
Not when you go fishing for compliments like that.

                          ARISTOTLE
What if I, too, was a “fisher of men”?

                          ELOHIM
Don’t use it in that context.

                          ARISTOTLE
What context?

                          ELOHIM
When you’re flirting with me.  The gospel doesn’t get me hot.

                          ARISTOTLE
What does?

                          ELOHIM
Honesty.

                          ARISTOTLE
Honestly, then, why are you here?  I’m curious.

                          ELOHIM
A friend of mine killed himself.

                          ARISTOTLE
     (pronouncing it JEE-suss)
Jesus.

                          ELOHIM
     (pronouncing it hay-SOOS)
Jesus.

                          ARISTOTLE
Bet you never get tired of that one.

                          ELOHIM
Beats being a hardass about taking the Lord’s name in vain.

                          ARISTOTLE
Sorry about your friend.

                          ELOHIM
Me, too.
It’s one of the only times I start wobbling – faith-wise.

                          ARISTOTLE
Suicides.

                          ELOHIM
Yup.

                          ARISTOTLE
So hitting on you - ?

                          ELOHIM
Not the best time.  No.

                          ARISTOTLE
Mind if I join you?

                          ELOHIM
Depends on where this conversation’s headed.  I’m kind of off the clock.  Or I’d like to be.

                          ARISTOTLE
Genesis.

                          ELOHIM
Peter Gabriel or Phil Collins?

                          ARISTOTLE
That joke used to be more current.

                          ELOHIM
So did Genesis.

                          ARISTOTLE
Beginning of the universe.

                          ELOHIM
The Big Bang.
Also the nickname for my first serious boyfriend.

                          ARISTOTLE
You’re on fire.

                          ELOHIM
I’ll be here all week.  Try the veal.  Don’t forget to tip your altar boys.

                          ARISTOTLE
You don’t have altar boys in your church.

                          ELOHIM
Don’t let them hear you say that.

                          ARISTOTLE
Do you get funnier or sloppier when you’re drunk?

                          ELOHIM
Shall we find out?

                          ARISTOTLE
I kind of want to talk.

                          ELOHIM
Then stop serving me set-up lines.

                          ARISTOTLE
The Enuma Elish.

                          ELOHIM
Wow.  Old school.

                          (to be continued)

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