Tuesday, November 28, 2017

November 2017 Writing Challenge - #28 - Verfremdungseffekt

Hey there!

Sorry if you've felt a bit alienated from this due to my falling behind.

I've never opened a show December 1st while this challenge was happening.

It's... overwhelming.

Anyway- let's REEXAMINE Verfremdungseffekt or Alienation effect


"Brecht saw that these audiences were manipulated by theater technology — beautiful, realistic sets, cleverly naturalistic lighting, the imaginary fourth wall, and most importantly, emotionally effusive acting techniques. He soon watched with horror as the Nazi movement gained popular support in his country with its racist, xenophobic demagoguery, relying on similar emotional manipulation. Emotional manipulation was, to him, Enemy Number One of human decency.

It was in this context that Brecht developed his theory of Verfremdungseffekt, also known as V-effekt, alienation effect, or distantiation effect. (Important disclaimer: there is compelling evidence that many of Brecht’s greatest ideas were developed in uncredited cooperation with his artistic partners).

The alienation effect attempts to combat emotional manipulation in the theater, replacing it with an entertaining or surprising jolt. "

So like the whole point of Western Cinema Blockbusters is usually the exact kind of thing that Brecht would have hated- identifying with superheroes that have unlimited power acting with questionable morality and without the consent of the populace as an example.

ANYWAY

Let's remember that in order for an alienation effect to be a VERB and not like... just super boring theater with no emotional (and therefor no THEATRICAL arc)... you need to pull people in! You need to have the puppy's head on the chopping block ready to strike as you talk about the importance of self-determination in politics... or whatever.

Formula: hugely compelling moment that draws immediate and inherent investment- INTERRUPTED to alienate and then deliver some other INTELLECTUAL message. Then resolve the moment smartly in conjunction with the intellectual content.

Go for it.

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And... one last chunk of the Jeffrey/Duncan arc, reworked, and turned into something more like a real scene to conclude their issues...

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The wiccan supply store.

JEFFREY enters, finding DUNCAN behind the counter, package in hand.

                          DUNCAN
As promised, the last piece of the puzzle.

                          JEFFREY
What do I owe you?

                          DUNCAN
You left me your card, remember?  It's taken care of.  Here's the receipt.

                          JEFFREY
Isn't there supposed to be a delivery charge or something?

                          DUNCAN
Guy owes me a favor.

                          JEFFREY
I get the feeling a lot of people owe you.

                          DUNCAN
What can I say?  I'm a helpful guy.

                          JEFFREY
You said no one likes being second choice.

                          DUNCAN
We don't have to do this now.

                          JEFFREY
What can I say?  I owe you.  So - ?

                          DUNCAN
No one should settle for being second choice.
Or settle *for* their second choice, not if there's someone else they really want instead.

                          JEFFREY
But what if that person isn't an option.

                          DUNCAN
Then hopefully you can let them go.

                          JEFFREY
Nobody gets their first choice though, not really.
I mean, sure, some people settle down with their childhood sweetheart but very very few.

                          DUNCAN
You saying they only call it first love because there's a second?

                          JEFFREY
Kind of.

                          DUNCAN
You're dodging the issue.
You shouldn't have to talk yourself into liking someone.

                          JEFFREY
I think you're selling yourself short.

                          DUNCAN
     (introducing the pot to the kettle it's calling black)
Pot, Kettle.  Kettle, Pot.

                          JEFFREY
Duncan -

                          DUNCAN
I've been burned before. OK?  A lot.  I'm trying to develop a better self-preservation instinct.

                          JEFFREY
Which is admirable.
But we all go through a lot of people, a lot of choices, some of whom are good for us, some of whom aren't.
But they all help make us who we are, for better or worse.
So hopefully you've made enough mistakes by the time the right person comes along that you can appreciate them when they're standing right in front of you.
And you can convince them you're the right person for them, too.
Look, neither of us is the other's first, or fourth, or even 20th choice -

                          DUNCAN
Just how many people have you dated?

                          JEFFREY
Shut up, I'm trying to be romantically realistic here.

                          DUNCAN
OK, continue.

                          JEFFREY
You're not my first.  But would you like to take a shot at being my last?

                          DUNCAN
You're getting better at this.

                          JEFFREY
That mean a kiss is in my future?

                          DUNCAN
I have to tell you everything?

                          JEFFREY
No.

                          DUNCAN
Well?

They kiss.

                          DUNCAN (cont'd)
Finally.

                          JEFFREY
You could just ask, you know.

                          DUNCAN
Chemistry lessons?  You need chemistry lessons, as well as the wiccan/pagan lessons?

                          JEFFREY
Apparently.

                          DUNCAN
If I'm standing this close to you -

                          JEFFREY
Yeah.

                          DUNCAN
Which, in my capacity as a store employee, is clearly unprofessional -

                          JEFFREY
Yeah.

                          DUNCAN
So far inside your personal space as to be uncomfortable -

                          JEFFREY
Yeah.

                          DUNCAN
That probably means I want to lay hands on you.

                          JEFFREY
Oh.

                          DUNCAN
So, you would be within your rights to kiss me.

                          JEFFREY
I see.

                          DUNCAN
Unless I tell you not to.

                          JEFFREY
Are you telling me not to?

                          DUNCAN
No.

                          JEFFREY
Good to know.

They kiss again.

                          DUNCAN
Teaching you how to be less socially awkward is going to be frustrating.

                          JEFFREY
But it's kinda fun, so far, right?

                          DUNCAN
Don't push your luck.

They kiss again.

                          DUNCAN
I can help you.

                          JEFFREY
Yes, we've established that.

                          DUNCAN
I mean, with the magic.

                          JEFFREY
And I'm grateful, I really am.  We'd be so screwed if you weren't -

                          DUNCAN
I don't mean just with this particular incident.

                          JEFFREY
Oh.

                          DUNCAN
I mean, if you want to learn.
The pagan stuff, the Wiccan stuff.
I can help.
I've been there.
I remember what it was like to be the newbie.
It wasn't that long ago.

                          JEFFREY
Yeah.  That'd be -

                          DUNCAN
And you don't need a love spell.
With me.
I see you.

                          JEFFREY
Oh.

                          DUNCAN
If you want.

                          JEFFREY
Yes.  Absolutely.  I mean, I see you, too.

                          DUNCAN
Good.
I'll try to keep the bossy mentor stuff and the boyfriend stuff separate.

                          JEFFREY
Love's hard enough -

                          DUNCAN
Yeah.


(to be continued)




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