Tuesday, November 29, 2016

Writing Challenge 2016 #28 - Hope and Cheese


NWC #28- "HOPE and CHEESE" Nov 29th at 8am

CHALLENGE- create a powerful image of coming together, of people helping people, of hope.

What if it's cheesy? *It'd better be!*
What if it's not cheesy enough?
*Add more cheese!*
Why do you keep bringing up cheese? *I'm really hungry!*
Do I really have to make people feel happy and hopeful and wonderful?* Yes.
Try it. You might like it.*
What if I start hating it and it becomes about the opposite of what it's supposed to be about and I can't help but destroy all things beautiful even as I create them?

*I don't know! You probably have something wrong with you.*
Can I make this children's theater?
*You can do whatever you want, but maybe try to make adults happy too? We all deserve to be happy.*
I don't know how to do this.* It's not really a question, but maybe the reason you don't is that it's a rare and scary thing to try to do well. We really punish artists for being happy and failing to make us happy. Why do we do that?*


(I slather on the cheese all the time, but I've been trying to push one more, possibly very sentimental, bus play idea out of my head and on to the page, so I'll try that...)


BUS PLAY #4

A woman in her late 90s sits on the bus, waiting.

A seven year old girl approaches.

                          GIRL
May I sit with you?

                          WOMAN
I would like that very much.

                          GIRL
I'm sorry we never got to meet.

                          WOMAN
By the time I was on my way out, you were still very young.

                          GIRL
I probably wouldn't have remembered you.

                          WOMAN
I probably wouldn't have remembered you either.

                          GIRL
My brain was still forming.

                          WOMAN
Mine was deteriorating.

                          GIRL
I'll remember you now.

                          WOMAN
And I you.

                          GIRL
It's good that he could tell me stories about you.

                          WOMAN
This is him remembering me when I was still in full control.

                          GIRL
Is it hard to start forgetting?

                          WOMAN
You know, I thought it would be, but I was remarkably OK with it.

                          GIRL
I'm still learning so many things.

                          WOMAN
There's a lot to learn.  It's a big world.

                          GIRL
Did you ever travel?

                          WOMAN
Not like you already have.  I'm not sure whether I even had a passport.  I certainly didn't need one.

                          GIRL
I was born in Montana.

                          WOMAN
I was born in Pennsylvania.

                          GIRL
We were both born in the states.

                          WOMAN
Something else we have in common.

                          GIRL
My little sister was born in Slovakia.

                          WOMAN
I can't imagine.

                          GIRL
It's not that different from here, really.

                          WOMAN
But it's so much older.

                          GIRL
Parts of it are older.  A lot of it is pretty new.

                          WOMAN
He went to visit you over there for the first time shortly after I died.

                          GIRL
He was sad.

                          WOMAN
I know.  I'm sorry about that.  You probably cheered him up quite a bit.

                          GIRL
Yes.

                          WOMAN
Was your little sister born yet?

                          GIRL
Just.  Five months.

                          WOMAN
Oh my.

                          GIRL
One morning, she spit up all over him.

                          WOMAN
Oh dear.

                          GIRL
It was mostly milk.

                          WOMAN
Of course.

                          GIRL
He laughed and laughed.

                          WOMAN
Really.

                          GIRL
We rushed around getting towels, and he stood there in a big white puddle in the middle of the floor.  Holding my sister, and smiling at her.

                          WOMAN
That sounds like him.

                          GIRL
Things are more crowded there.

                          WOMAN
Yes.

                          GIRL
There's so much space here.

                          WOMAN
Yes.

                          GIRL
It's a wonder anyone runs into anyone else at all sometimes.

                          WOMAN
I'm glad we ran into each other.

                          GIRL
I have three grandmas.

                          WOMAN
Goodness.

                          GIRL
You would be my great-grandmother.

                          WOMAN
Yes, I guess I would.  I never had any great-grandchildren.  That I met.

                          GIRL
The first time I play Scrabble with him, he's going to talk about you a lot.

                          WOMAN
Don't let him win.

                          GIRL
I won't.

                          WOMAN
I never did.





(to be continued)


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