Wednesday, November 30, 2016

Writing Challenge 2016 #29 - No Fourth Wall


NWC #29- "No Fourth Wall" Nov 30th at 8am

Shakespeare didn't have a fourth wall. Moliere didn't either. The times when theater was the most popular, this concept didn't exist. Why deny your audience direct connection with the performers?

Why limit the actions you can have on stage to self-contained, justified, laborious interactions between full rounded characters?  Afraid it will be bad? You don't like this kind of theater? Maybe that's just because people like you don't write in this genre enough!

*CHALLENGE*- Agit Prop this sumbitch.
1. political (originally communist) propaganda, especially in art or literature. ("agitprop painters")

Take a well-known tale and use it for your own means. Goldilocks and the three candidates? Little Red Scare? The Wonderful World of School Board Meetings? Who is John from Accounting?

*Bonus*- Write in as many dialects and races and socio-economic backgrounds as you can. These characters are SUPPOSED to be flat comments on large groups of people.

*Bonus*- Interact with the audience PHYSICALLY not just verbally. Make them hold something or reveal something, or find something under their seats.



(Time for agitprop later, gotta get that next bus play done, or at least continued...
Point in the bus play's favor, there will be no stage, no fourth wall.  The plays will take place with other passengers all around)



BUS PLAY #4, part 2

A woman in her late 90s.

A girl of seven years old.

Sitting together, on a bus, on the ice in the middle of a lake.

(Last time...)

                          GIRL
You would be my great-grandmother.

                          WOMAN
Yes, I guess I would.  I never had any great-grandchildren.  That I met.

                          GIRL
The first time I play Scrabble with him, he's going to talk about you a lot.

                          WOMAN
Don't let him win.

                          GIRL
I won't.

                          WOMAN
I never did.

                          GIRL
You don't want to get stuck with the Q.

                          WOMAN
Or the J.

                          GIRL
Or the X.

                          WOMAN
Or the K.

                          GIRL
You hoard the blank tiles and at least one U.

                          WOMAN
You memorize the handful of words that don't need a U to go with a Q.

                          GIRL
You keep the scrabble dictionary nearby.

                          WOMAN
You do a lot of crossword puzzles.

                          GIRL
It's how you keep your mind sharp.

                          WOMAN
So many words.

                          GIRL
You go for the big words and the big scoring tiles.

                          WOMAN
Be careful, though.  You don't want to just come close and end up setting the other person up for a big score.

                          GIRL
But you have to risk it.

                          WOMAN
No, you play it safe.  Avoid the edges.  Make small words if you have to.  Deny the other person a foothold they can build on.

                          GIRL
But if you don't open up the board, the game gets too constricted, no one can play.

                          WOMAN
There's always a play.
Or you can skip a turn.
Don't make it easy for the other person to beat you.

                          GIRL
Doesn't the game stop being fun then?

                          WOMAN
Board games is one of the few places in life where you're allowed to be vicious.  It's encouraged.  Use your brain.  Show no mercy.

                          GIRL
What about cribbage?

                          WOMAN
Also fun.  More chance, though.  More rules.  I like Scrabble just a bit better.  Words and letters.  An orderly board.  Cribbage can be very random.

                          GIRL
He said you were good with a deck of cards.

                          WOMAN
Big family.  Lot of game playing over the years.

                          GIRL
Your hands seem bony.

                          WOMAN
Never did have much meat on me.  And when you're older, the skin sags.  You hollow out.  Blessed with good joints though.  My hands never fell victim to arthritis.

                          GIRL
You skin seems translucent, more blue than pink.

                          WOMAN
Everything gets a little grayer when you're older.  The blood retreats from the extremities.

                          GIRL
Are you fragile?

                          WOMAN
Are you?

                          GIRL
I'm small.

                          WOMAN
I'm light, but I'm strong.  There's a difference.  You don't live to be one hundred years, one month and one day if you're prone to fall apart when life bats you around.



(to be continued)



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