Monday, November 12, 2018

November Writing Challenge 2018 - 12 - Twelfth Night


THE TWELFTH CHALLENGE:

Wikipedia: Twelfth Night, or What You Will is a comedy by William Shakespeare, believed to have been written around 1601–1602 as a Twelfth Night's entertainment for the close of the Christmas season. The play centres on the twins Viola and Sebastian, who are separated in a shipwreck. Viola (who is disguised as Cesario) falls in love with Duke Orsino, who in turn is in love with the Countess Olivia. Upon meeting Viola, Countess Olivia falls in love with her thinking she is a man.

Right. Great. So, what I’m getting out of this in this moment is a gender fluid Christmas adventure love story.

Challenge: Rewrite Twelfth Night. A gender fluid drunken Christmas adventure love story.

Rule: No Santas.

Want a little more COMPLETELY UNNECESSARY (because you’re brilliant without trivial or justification) dramaturgy to inspire you?

A popular Twelfth Night tradition was to have a bean and pea hidden inside a Twelfth-night cake; the "man who finds the bean in his slice of cake becomes King for the night while the lady who finds a pea in her slice of cake becomes Queen for the night. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Twelfth_Night_(holiday)

And

People could be drinking 'lambswool' from a large communal wassailing bowl.

Wassail is a hot, mulled punch often associated with Yuletide, drunk from a 'wassailing bowl'. The earliest versions were warmed mead into which roasted crab apples were dropped and burst to create a drink called 'lambswool' drunk on Lammas day, still known in Shakespeare's time.



(Twelfth Night is my second favorite Shakespeare play, so I’m definitely digging into this one later.  For now, more of a different Shakespeare play)



Meanwhile, down in the dungeon –

ACTRESS 3 dashes over and picks up the IACHIMO puppet for the following -

                          ACTRESS 1 (IMOGEN/Fidelis)
Where did you get that ring?!

                          ACTRESS 3 (IACHIMO, puppet)
This ring?

                          ACTRESS 1 (IMOGEN/Fidelis)
Wait!  I know you!  You scoundrel!

                          ACTRESS 3 (IACHIMO, puppet)
I've never met you before in my life, boy.  Though it does appear you know me well.

                          ACTRESS 1 (IMOGEN/Fidelis)
You men don't spend much time looking at a woman's face at all, do you?

                          ACTRESS 3 (IACHIMO, puppet)
When you grow a little hair on your chin, boy, you'll understand that there are much more important parts of a woman you'll want to be focusing your attention on.

The withering stare from ACTRESS 1 (IMOGEN/Fidelis) unsettles ACTRESS 2 (IACHIMO, puppet) just enough to cause him to rephrase himself on the fly.

                          ACTRESS 3 (IACHIMO, puppet) (cont’d)
Such as her brain - and her sense of humor - and her personality.

                          ACTRESS 1 (IMOGEN/Fidelis)
You took that ring from another man.

                          ACTRESS 3 (IACHIMO, puppet)
I didn't have to take it, he willingly gave it to me.

                          ACTRESS 1 (IMOGEN/Fidelis)
It was a token from his beloved.

                          ACTRESS 3 (IACHIMO, puppet)
Formerly beloved.  I convinced him his lady was untrue.

                          ACTRESS 1 (IMOGEN/Fidelis)
How?

                          ACTRESS 3 (IACHIMO, puppet)
Well, it wasn't nearly as fun as I'd hoped it would be.  The lady was, inexplicably, resistant to my charms.  So I had to improvise.  I hid myself in her room until she fell asleep, memorized some of the key elements of the decor, stole a bracelet off her arm which was a token from the gullible young man (the bracelet, not her arm), and got a little peek at the birthmark on her -

                          ACTRESS 1 (IMOGEN/Fidelis)
OK, OK, that's enough.

                          ACTRESS 3 (IACHIMO, puppet)
But we're all about to die.  Might as well confess my sins.

                          ACTRESS 1 (IMOGEN/Fidelis)
You're enjoying it too much.

                          ACTRESS 3 (IACHIMO, puppet)
Sinning wouldn't be worth doing if it wasn't fun, am I right?

                          ACTRESS 1 (IMOGEN/Fidelis)
Then you're going to have some more fun confessing to the man you wronged.  Come on.

Meanwhile, in another part of the dungeon, in a strangely colored pool of light, ACTRESS 2 (POSTHUMUS)'s sleep is troubled by dreams.

This takes the form of a visitation by five sock puppets.

ACTRESS 1 takes on the role of sock PUPPET MOTHER.

ACTRESS 3 takes on the role of sock PUPPET FATHER.

ACTOR 1 takes on the roles of sock PUPPET BROTHERS 1 and 2.

                          ACTRESS 3 (PUPPET FATHER)
Jupiter!

                          ACTRESS 1 (PUPPET MOTHER)
Great Jupiter!

                          ACTOR 1 (PUPPET BROTHER #1)
Lord of the Gods!

                          ACTOR 1 (PUPPET BROTHER #2) (cont’d)
We, the dead relatives of Posthumus, cry out to you for relief!

                          ACTRESS 2 (POSTHUMUS)
What the hell is going on?

                          ACTRESS 3 (PUPPET FATHER)
We are the sock puppets of your subconscious, my son!

                          ACTRESS 1 (PUPPET MOTHER)
Here to implore on your behalf!

                          ACTOR 1 (PUPPET BROTHER #1)
Our family has suffered enough loss at the hands of uncaring playwrights!

                          ACTOR 1 (PUPPET BROTHER #2) (cont’d)
Your other puppet brother and I, both lost in the wars!

                          ACTRESS 2 (POSTHUMUS)
What wars?

                          ACTRESS 1 (PUPPET MOTHER)
It's just vague exposition, my son.  Roll with it.

                          ACTOR 1 (PUPPET BROTHER #2)
Lost in the wars!  Mama and papa, grief-stricken, died of a broken heart.

                          ACTOR 1 (PUPPET BROTHER #1) (cont’d)
Hearts.

                          ACTOR 1 (PUPPET BROTHER #2) (cont’d)
What?

                          ACTOR 1 (PUPPET BROTHER #1) (cont’d)
Broken hearts, plural, mama and papa, more than one heart.

                          ACTOR 1 (PUPPET BROTHER #2) (cont’d)
It was as if they had only one heart, too weak to bear the tragic loss of their children!

                          ACTRESS 2 (POSTHUMUS)
But they still had me.

                          ACTOR 1 (PUPPET BROTHER #1)
Not enough!

                          ACTOR 1 (PUPPET BROTHER #2) (cont’d)
They loved us too much!

                          ACTOR 1 (PUPPET BROTHER #1) (cont’d)
And you, apparently, too little.

                          ACTRESS 2 (POSTHUMUS)
This is my dream.  Why am I getting all this attitude?

                          ACTRESS 3 (PUPPET FATHER)
Don't try to push your issues with low self-esteem off on us.

                          ACTRESS 1 (PUPPET MOTHER)
The only hope of saving the great name of Posthumus from extinction, is to exhort the gods!

ACTOR 2 takes on the role of sock PUPPET JUPITER, king of the gods.

                          ACTOR 2 (PUPPET JUPITER)
All right, all right!  Pipe down, already.  The puppet ex machina has arrived.  It is I, Jupiter!

                          ACTRESS 3 (PUPPET FATHER)
Great Jupiter!

                          ACTOR 2 (PUPPET JUPITER)
Yeah, yeah, I heard all that.  Get on with it.

                          ACTRESS 1 (PUPPET MOTHER)
Forbid the unnecessary and untimely death of our last remaining son!

                          ACTRESS 3 (PUPPET FATHER)
He may not be much -

                          ACTRESS 2 (POSTHUMUS)
Hey!

                          ACTRESS 3 (PUPPET FATHER)
But he is the only hope of continuing our great lineage.

                          ACTOR 2 (PUPPET JUPITER)
You could have saved yourself - and me - a lot of caterwauling if you just waited a scene or two.  All hidden identities will be revealed, all couples reunited, and two great nations will once again live in harmony.  But you have to be a little patient.  This story's way too complicated for a quick and easy wrap-up.

ACTRESS 1 drops her puppet arm and again becomes IMOGEN/Fidelis; and

ACTRESS 3 drops one puppet arm and reanimates the IACHIMO puppet on the other; and

The two of them appear, in order to rouse ACTRESS 2 (POSTHUMUS) from sleep.

                          ACTRESS 1 (IMOGEN/Fidelis)
Posthumus!  Wake up!

All the sock puppets abruptly fly off into the dark and ACTRESS 2 (POSTHUMUS) just as suddenly sits up, wide awake.

                          ACTRESS 2 (POSTHUMUS)
I thought with a dream like that, I'd wake up and not still be in a dungeon.

                          ACTRESS 1 (IMOGEN/Fidelis)
Well, you are in a dungeon.  And you're a moron.

                          ACTRESS 2 (POSTHUMUS)
Hey, I've got sock puppets for abuse like that.

                          ACTRESS 1 (IMOGEN/Fidelis)
Tell him.

                          ACTRESS 3 (IACHIMO, puppet)
You're gullible.  I lied.  Your lady was not untrue.

                          ACTRESS 2 (POSTHUMUS)
Really?  Man, I wish I hadn't had her killed.

                          ACTRESS 1 (IMOGEN/Fidelis)
You didn't!

                          ACTRESS 2 (POSTHUMUS)
I didn't?

                          ACTRESS 1 (IMOGEN/Fidelis)
Well, you did.  But the servant you sent to do it actually had a conscience, and a questioning mind, so he didn't carry out your ridiculous vendetta.

                          ACTRESS 2 (POSTHUMUS)
I find myself relieved to hear that.

                          ACTRESS 1 (IMOGEN/Fidelis)
Well, bully for you.

                          ACTRESS 2 (POSTHUMUS)
Wait.  How do you know this?

                          ACTRESS 1 (IMOGEN/Fidelis)
Honestly!  What is wrong with you people?!



(to be continued)




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